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Sherman Alexie's avatar

Great poem. Years back, I worked on a screenplay adaptation of Young Men and Fire for Warner Brothers. Hung out with Missoula smoke jumpers for a couple days (at headquarters not in the woods!).

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Tara Penry's avatar

Beautiful wild land images, Josh! I love the contrast between the precarious, wavering helicopter, seeming too lightweight for the forces of air drafts and rock and dangerous power lines, and you grounded with the burned cedar and the known work of sawing and heaving wood “For now.” The poem is full of uncertainty, but there is presence in the work of “now.”

I appreciate the many paths you allow for yourself on Substack. I wonder when I try new things here whether I am sacrificing coherence or burdening my site with too much complexity, but I remember that I’m here to venture new things. Still, it’s hard to shake the academic sense that all details “relate” tidily, or the commercial drive to “brand.” Your work is always thought-provoking and satisfying!

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