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Nice one Josh. I like how I felt a rising energy as I got to the end. Evokes the place, too.

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Thanks! Known to locals as “The Point.”

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Powerful memories from Colorado arise from this beautiful poem. Thank you Josh.

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I imagine there are many such swimming holes throughout the Rockies. Glad it landed.

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Love the turn at the end. Super and lovely.

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Thanks Mary! I thought of your memoir while preparing this.

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Here's the link for others who might like to read the memoir that could never have been written as fiction: https://marytabor.substack.com/s/remaking-love-a-memoir

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Beautiful!

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